if you would know,
know, what you mean to me,
you're the nightclub,
open 24 hours,
you're the eagle,
flying between the vultures,
you're my light,
in the starless nights,
you're the character
in the apathic crowd,
you're the drama in the comedy,
you're the heat in winter,
and the ice in summer,
you're so much to me
You will never know how I feel,
when I see your smile,
it's like a bland silence
in the noise of the world,
a calm moment
in these stressful times,
a warm chill in my veins,
making my heart beating faster,
making me shiver,
giving me a reckless feeling
Be mine,
be mine,
I will lay down the whole world to your feet,
just for one day with you
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in the noise of the world, a calm moment in these stressful times, a warm chill in my veins, making my heart beating faster, making me shiver, giving me a reckless feeling Some of the best poetry I've read in a long time. This is beautiful. You should really be proud of it  oO thanks so much for these words!
I thought it's a bit too...uhm...slimy ;> -- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge Not slimy at all! It's beautiful
 Whoever it's written to should truly be pleased. They're very lucky hehe thanks ;>
-- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge  this is good. You're a great poet. you should write more poems.
-- -Everyone's important in my world. There are no rejects. -If you call me, and I'm not available, that means I'm somewhere in fantasy land. thanks a lot for that compliment ;>
I will see, that I write a few more in the next time ^.^ -- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge  thank you
-- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge |
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Wow.. This is so beautiful ^-^
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