Another Night,
a different fight,
words get messed,
rises up, like a pest
Tell me why it seems so hard,
tell me why it tears me apart,
tell me why I feel so for you,
tell me, will our dreams come true?
Embrace me like never before,
I'll take you to the river,
I'll take you to the shore,
I want to make you shiver,
cause you the one I adore
Let's build a sandcastle,
in sun or in rain,
trust me,
it won't be in vain
Hopes and dreams,
in sand, it seems
they're lasting forever,
well, I won't let them die, never!
On this page, you can:
Start your own free art collection. Sign up here!DownloadSee more of this artist:VirginPrune's ProfileVirginPrune's GalleryVirginPrune's Prints
©2009-2010 =VirginPrune
Author's Comments
written 2 minutes ago, just a few thoughts...
All images and literature/written work in =VirginPrune’s gallery are © Marcus Bretschneider. All rights reserved. Reproduction and/or retransmission of all or any part of this gallery are prohibited under copyright law this includes via Twitter, Facebook and other social networking sites/domains. Users desiring to reproduce or retransmit all or any part of this gallery must first secure in WRITING the appropriate copyright and other authorization from the copyright owner. My work is not Public Domain. Thankyou. Comments
 Hi there; what kind of critique are you looking for?
hello...well you can write anything you want, for sure I'm happy about good critique, but bad critique is ok too, maybe some constructive critique, which helps to improve my writing
 -- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge I guess the real reason I asked is that the piece sounds like it's highly personal. I'd hate to sink my teeth into it, only to find out that it's written in some personal 'style' or is too emotional to touch.
  It speaks of hope, even though times may seem tough. I can relate very well; I have goals that may, to other people, seem far-fetched or near impossible, but I won't stop fighting to complete my goals.
I like it a lot. It's well written and it really speaks to me!-- Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons... for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup. thanks a lot
-- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge hehe ok ;>
-- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge You're quite welcome!
-- Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons... for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup.  Hmm. This is good. I really like it.
-- Textually Active. Ask me about contests and features! *YourChameleon *art-theft-awareness *DailyLitDeviations thanks a lot
-- With pleasure, for fun I will choose the biggest gun I’m a soldier, I’m a big boy Jesus is my lovely toy =Apophysis ~ABCofLifeChallenge |
|
Report a Policy Violation
Site Map
Community News124 Celebrating Deviousness - January 2010$chix0r
 reports, 1d 6h agoThe Deviousness Award is an accolade which is traditionally handed out on the 1st of every month to one truly outstanding deviant. 117 helping-the-unknown: 04/01/10=omenofthedeep
 reports, 1d 16h agohelping-the-unknown's monday feature 71 ARTISTSKETCHBOOKS.com officially opens today!*imaginism
 reports, 1d 12h agoChk out iPhone sketchbook apps at [link] Random commenters will gets a promocode for a free app throughout the day! 67 Daily Literature Deviations for January 4, 2010=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 22h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.60 Daily Literature Deviations - January 05, 2010=DailyLitDeviations
reports, 19h 21m agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.59 The Future, today - December09^gucken
 reports, 1d 4h agoMonthly news "out of this world" including December DDs |
PollWhat is your New Year's resolution? |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,438 days.
Only 214 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
Although `DEVlANT joined our community only a year ago, he's made sure to make his mark in as many ways as possible. From extensive bug testing around the site, to heading up the now infamous #devBUG Group, Martin's always eager to get involved. His inquisitive mind and enthusiastic personality is reflected in every part of the community which he reaches out to. Always eager to bring suggestions and feedback to us in a positive way, `DEVlANT shows a maturity way beyond his years. It's with great pleasure that we award very first Deviousness of 2010 t... Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
©2010 deviantART. All rights reserved
Critiques
Thank you for your Critique
You are not logged in.